software freedom typos

srctweb/website/templates/documents/software_freedom.html

@@ -31,11 +31,11 @@ Not free as in free beer, but free as in free speech.
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     <p>SRCT creates and provides services for the benefit our school. One of those
-    benefits is providing opportunities for everyone to contribute on our projects.
-    Not only does this provide students the chance to learn from experience, from
-    each other, and foster a sense of community, and not only do we believe that
-    our collective knowledge can build and deploy better projects than anyone could
-    individually, but that free computing is an ideal of
+    benefits is providing the opportunity for everyone to contribute to our
+    projects, giving students the chance to learn from experience, from each other,
+    and to foster a sense of community. We believe our collective knowledge can
+    build and deploy better projects than anyone could individually, but we
+    believe that free computing is an ideal of
     <a href="https://www.gnu.org/education/edu-why.html">particular importance</a>
     within an academic environment, where students are taught the virtues of
     intellectual and social freedoms and independence.</p>
@@ -51,13 +51,14 @@ Not free as in free beer, but free as in free speech.
 
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-    <p>We encourages every student to learn about programming through our
-    services, and believes that knowledge is of utmost importance in a time of
-    rapid, software-based societal changes. This learning, and by extension a full
-    understanding of the technological and cultural shifts we are currently
-    experiencing, is possible only with free software.</p>
+    <p>We encourage every student to learn about programming through our
+    services, and believe that that knowledge is of utmost importance in a time
+    of rapid, software-based societal changes. This learning opportunity, and by
+    extension a full understanding of the technological and cultural shifts we
+    are currently experiencing, is possible only with free software.</p>
 
-    <p>For developers, additional information on SRCT and software freedom, including information on licensing, is available on 
+    <p>Additional information on SRCT and software freedom for developers,
+    including information on licensing, is available on 
     <a href="http://wiki.srct.gmu.edu/wiki/index.php/Software_Freedom">our wiki</a>.
 
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